Strengths:
My topic is interesting and also I have good examples to support my observations about what is happening in Darfur. Also my peers talked about how it was good to explain what caused the genocide to occur.
Weaknesses:
They thought I might want to talk about what exactly is the U.N. Also I should talk about why it is so hard to keep peace in Darfur. I should also try to relate it on a personal level and not have too many facts. Someone also brought up the question of "What is the UN suppose to do?"
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